try to push the contrast of the light and shadow sides more next time. If this is supposed to be a bright sunny day the light planes would be much brighter and the shadow side a bit darker. Right now it feels gloomy with a blue sky which is not working.
Ok, yeah, I was feeling like it was off but could see why. The roof looks more dull red than it should. I was kind of having a hard time with the composition of this one too. How would you have improved that?
try to push the contrast of the light and shadow sides more next time. If this is supposed to be a bright sunny day the light planes would be much brighter and the shadow side a bit darker.
ReplyDeleteRight now it feels gloomy with a blue sky which is not working.
Keep it up!
Ok, yeah, I was feeling like it was off but could see why.
ReplyDeleteThe roof looks more dull red than it should.
I was kind of having a hard time with the composition of this one too.
How would you have improved that?
Thanks for the notes!